Friday, 27 September 2019

recounts

In room one we have been writing recounts.
I enjoyed writing it.
I found it hard to think of what to do.
It was mid-afternoon at Hamilton rugby park it was half time. Fiji was on thirty one and U.s.a was on thirty three. I thought we had no chance of winning the game restarted U.s.a was about to score I thought all hopes were lost. But Fiji tackled him and took the ball the crowd was screaming I felt like I was screaming my vocal cords out Fiji scored thirty four to thirty three.

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